There was so much more...
...that you could have done with this. I saw the trailer and now I've seen you complete movie, Frankly, they're about the same length. The animation quality was excellent, but the movie was simply too short. You made World War II seem like it lasted a couple of days.
It was alright.
It was all well-drawn, but the sound was quite hard to make out at times and the entire movie seemed disconnected and inane. Besides, Half-Life 2 owns Halo 2 anyday.
Of coarse Half-Life2>Halo 2 cause its a PC game vs a console game. 0.0
In need of improvement.
I might just go back to square one with this game if I were you. By the looks of it, this game needs an overhaul. First, the graphics really could be a lot better. Great graphics can make even the worst game enjoyable. Second, the game engine needs to be tweaked/redesigned. Jump and movement physics need to be redone. The marble should have acceleration and deceleration, so that it actually feels like the marble is rolling. The jumping feels WAY off. Collision detection is somewhat poor. You have the makings of a potentially great game, but this definately needs improvement.
...but not front page worthy. Although this showed some cool effects that can be achieved with actionscript, it's not particularly entertaining, informative or inovative. It may have been better if you actually had a narrarator speaking your comments about each cursor, or if you taught people some of the fundamentals behind creating those cursors. I did, however, enjoy some of the cursor effects you created.
The only problem is that there's a lot of things that can piss people off.
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